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-Today is a special anniversary for our family. My parents
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-and I decided to do something different to celebrate it.
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-First, we went to the court near our home to play
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-badminton. We had a great time there and I could feel the
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-love and warmth in our family. After that, we went to a
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-restaurant. I had a big appetite and ate a lot. My parents
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-said they appreciate the time we spend together. On the
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-way home, we talked about our ancestors and how they
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-lived in the past. My father advocated that we should
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-learn from them and work hard. We also discussed some
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-alternatives for our future family activities. Suddenly, there
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-was an announcement on the radio about a new park in
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-our city. We were very interested in it and decided to visit
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-it next time. As we walked, I absorbed the beautiful
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-scenery around me. When we got home, my parents
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-applauded my efforts in today's activities.
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+Tom's ancestors were great inventors, and he wanted to
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+be an inventor too. On his 10th anniversary of starting to
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+learn about inventions, he made an announcement that
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+he would try to make an alternative energy device.
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+However, the process was really hard, and he almost lost
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+his appetite because of the difficulties. His friends and
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+family advocated him to keep going and not to give up.
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+Tom absorbed all the knowledge he could from books and
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+the Internet. Finally, after many tries, his new device was
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+successful, and the audience applauded for his wonderful
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+work. People all appreciated his effort and creativity in the
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+court of public opinion.
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absorb
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abvocate
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